My first foray into the world of Authorship - Field Manual: Wolverine in Hiding

[ralgith]

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Sorry man. I didn't notice the post till now.

Pretty good writing skills I must say! This is only an excerpt right?

Right. AND I've even improved this section since... though many of the "improvements" are related to the universe it takes place in. For example I changed the Hells Horses to the Ghost Bears because the Horses had virtually NO Navy, whereas the Ghost Bears have the largest Navy outside the Wolverines I'm writing about. I'm still cleaning up the run on sentences and what not, but thanks for the Kudos on what is essentially a rough draft.

I doubt anyone would enjoy the rest of the book, since it is a gaming sourcebook (manual) and not fiction. But the company that makes the game always leads their books off with such an "action excerpt" as this to give flavor to the writing. I'm following their format almost exclusively for continuity and because its a good format.